I’ve been doing alot of work on my copy over the last week or so. I really feel, between the copy and my report, my writing is alway improving. It really does come with practice and also using a dictionary as an extension of your body.
Lorcan had a read over it, on the day we filmed. He said to send it onto him and that he’d make a few slight changes to it for me.
I have attached a PDF here with the copy I worked on myself. I will follow it up with the changes I receive from Lorcan.